Essay 11 Outline

(TS) Many problems of teenagers these days.

(Bell word) Predicament, dilemma, obstacle

           (SD) International students

(CM) Many international students have major depressive disorder.

(CM) Example of Samsung.

           (SD) Teenagers’ drug uses and smoking

                     (CM) According to the internet site that I researched…

                     (CM) Ex: My friends

           (SD) Korean parents and teachers’ discipline to Korean teenagers.

(CM) In Korea, physical discipline- disciplining teenagers by physical punishment is one of the major problems.

(CM) Ex: Most of the young children, who were physically disciplined, often tend to be hostile, defiant, and aggressive socially.

(CS) Three major problems of teenagers must be aided.

(TS) I also have some problems

           (SD) I am not doing well in academics

                     (CM) I don’t get good grades from many classes that I expected to get

                     (CM) important for registering the high schools that I want to attend.

           (SD)  I go to bed very late.

                     (CM) trained to go to bed late.

                    (CM) cannot sleep before 11 p.m. and I’m not awake during the classes at school.

           (CS) I face these problems.