Sunday, October 10, 2010

Comeplete Essay 4

Privacy:
Opinions Concerning Teenagers and Privacy
An Essay by Inpyo Hong
8th Grade English
Pine Point School
October 10, 2010

           Have you ever concealed your privacies or secrets from others? A secret is a significant part that humans want to conceal. Privacies and secrets play important roles in our lives. Vicious problems of the prier and destroying one’s life are examples that show why it is very inappropriate for kids to pry into others’ secrets and lives.
Most of people want their privacies be hidden because the privacies may affect themselves maliciously if it is discovered. Very vicious problems occur when people try to find out one’s privacy. The vicious problems are that people ignore the one’s personality and individuality while they pry the one’s secret. They do not think about how the person would be affected by their actions.  Thus, it is wrong for kids to try to pry into people’s lives and discover their privacies because kids would keep prying into others’ lives and ignoring others’ individualities.
Moreover, prying into others’ privacies may destroy the others’ lives. People have numerous reasons for concealing their privacies. For instance, some people want their secrets to be concealed if the secrets are about their jobs, financials, and properties. The three examples may be destroyed because of someone prying into their secrets. Especially, kids can be problems because they are able to speak to others about the secrets.  In addition, if the three examples are destroyed, the people’s lives would be devastated. Hence, it is strongly inappropriate for kids to pry into others’ privacies.
Overall, kids prying into others’ lives are very inappropriate because they may occur malicious problems such as ignoring one’s individuality. Furthermore, kids may destroy one’s life by leaking out the one’s privacies. Therefore, prying into others' privacies is very improper for kids.

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