Outline for Essay 8

Inpyo Hong

English 8A

November 16, 2010

Outline for Essay 8

Bell Word: Loneliness

Paragraph 1

(Hook) Loneliness = feeling when you are depressed, and have feeling of being alone.

(CM) Dill’s loneliness with his parents.

(CM) My memories of being lonesome.

(Thesis) people fill lonely in many different ways.

Paragraph 2

(TS) Dill felt loneliness.

(Bell words) Forsake, outcast, or lonesome.

(SD) Dill-“They just wasn’t in to me.”

(CM) Did not show interests at Dill.

(CM) Went into their room and spent time.

(SM) “You’ve got toys play with them.”

(CM) Did not spend time with Dill.

(CM) Seems like ignoring their child.

(CS) Dill felt forsaken because of their parents.

Paragraph 3

(TS) My memories of loneliness.

(Bell words) Outcast, lonely, or solitary

(SD) Feel lonely every time.

(CM) International student – homesick.

(CM) Sometimes, truly want to see my parents.

(SD) Feel solitary – my friends ignore me, and except me from the group.

(CM) Rely on friends, and trust them a lot.

(CM) Sometimes, believe it’s because of racism (Asian) – makes me more outcast.

(CS) I fill lonely because of my beliefs- homesick, wanting to see parents, racism.

Paragraph 4

(Bell Word) Lonesome

(Hook) People become lonesome in numerous ways.

(CM) Dill became outcast because of their parents.

(CM) I become lonely when I think about my house, parents, and friends excepting me.

(CS) Loneliness may not be happened to you if you think about yourself and others differently because loneliness occurs when you think others and yourself is same.