Monday, February 7, 2011

Outline for Assessment Body Paragraph 1

(TS) There are some reasons why I chose B&GC.
(SD) I hoped to volunteer for young children
                           (CM) I wanted to help young children rather than animals and old people.
                           (CM) I feel more comfortable with children than animals and old people.
             (SD) Rosenberg family told me about B&GC.
                           (CM) I was fascinated when I heard what Austin did last year.
                          (CM) Austin said there will be many interesting things if I work for B&GC.
             (SD) I wanted to see how I can change young children to be better than before.
(CM) There are lots of children who have very bad attitude at everything and I wanted to teach them how to have better attitudes and how to respect people.
                           (CM) I expected that I will feel very successful if I change them.
             (CS) This is why I chose my service site.

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